Penprints Flash Fiction Dash 2019

It’s time for the Penprints Flash Fiction Dash again!

I had so much fun during last year’s dash that I knew I had to join in on this one. I loved creating a new story using the prompt provided, and I hope that you all enjoy it! But first, we have some details to go over. 😉

The Details…

This story was written for Rosalie Valentine’s Flash Fiction Dash. Many thanks to her for organizing this. ❤ Click here to learn more about the dash and visit her website.

The story’s word count is 998. Jusstttt below 1,000.

My story’s category is contemporary! I had such fun writing a contemporary story last year that I knew I wanted to write another contemporary story this year.

My prompt for this year is a song, “Younger Now,” sung by Miley Cyrus. I was really inspired by the sound of rain at the beginning of the song, as well as the words, “Change is a thing you can count on,” and the vibe of being young, wild, and free. Click here to listen to “Younger Now.”

And now, finally, for the story! Enjoy! 🙂

The Story…

Tap, tap, tap…

A computer sings out the song of typing in the corner of Sky’s Coffee and Books. The figure hunched over it is mesmerized by the words she is creating. He watches as her brow scrunches and her coffee grows cold. He can only imagine what she’s writing.

Tap, tap, tap…

Rain leaves tearstains on the glass of the window that she sits next to. A rumble comes from the sky outside. The girl keeps tapping, stopping only to brush away a strand of hair that has escaped her messy bun. She doesn’t notice the man who has spilled his coffee or the shelves of musty-smelling books. Just the words.

Tap, tap, tap…

And then she looks up.

He suddenly becomes very interested in his mug. The tapping stops. A chair skids against the floor. He takes a swig of his drink. Wrinkles his nose. The coffee tasted better hot.

“Hello.”

He looks up into the girl’s wide eyes. “Hi.” Is she coming over here to scold him for staring?

She offers him a smile, which he returns. “Do you mind if I sit here?”

He stares for a moment at the empty chair across from him. “Sure.”

Before he can take another swallow of his coffee, she’s sitting across from him, her computer now tucked away in her shoulder bag, her drink in front of her, and her gaze on him.

Now that she’s closer, he recognizes her. He knows her face, but not her name. She is one of the girls from school who smiles at everyone and probably dances in the rain. They have met in passing before. He wonders if she recognizes him. Instead of asking that, he decides to ask, “What are you writing?”

He’s such an idiot, starting off a conversation like that.

Either she doesn’t notice this fact, or she doesn’t care, because there’s that smile. A pause, then, “It’s silly, but… You know, memories are like movies. You replay them in your head, over and over, mulling over the plot, the actors, the settings, and the script.” A blush creeps over her face. “Sorry, it’s weird.”

He shrugs. “Weird is cool with me.” Actually, what she said made sense. Memories, good and bad, are like movies.

The girl continues. “But memories, unlike movies, have been lived by the person who possesses them. They can’t be experienced again and again, like a movie could be experienced again. There is one moment, a single space in time that creates a memory.”

A sigh. A far-off look comes into her eyes. For a moment, he wonders if she is still here at Sky’s and not elsewhere. “And… You will never have that moment back.”

Without another word, she slips her computer out of her bag. Types a little more. Shows him the screen.

They are just words, phrases, snippets, but something tells him that they are more…

Capture the flag.
The creak of old swings.
Flannels and jeans.
Purple blackberry stains.
Card games at the picnic table.
Swimming in the lake.
Milkshakes at Sonic.
Staring at the stars.
Working on the car.
Long talks and long walks.
Dreaming and laughing.
Bike rides and soccer.
Hair blowing in the wind.
Sunshine, the kind that feels good and warm and comforting.
Jokes that make no sense.
Wondering and wishing.
Friends…

…On and on the list goes. He looks up from it. Tries to think up what memories these words represent, what moments had created them. He has a feeling that, even though he doesn’t know this girl’s name, she has just bared a part of her soul to him.

In these words, he can see summers that ought to live in memories forever. In these words, he sees a girl and her friends. In these words, he sees a past, a story, that is sorely missed.

“It’s beautiful.” He slides the computer back to her. “Does it, well, the story… Does it have an ending?”

She closes the computer, and it is as if she is closing a box of magic. The magic that the words had painted is washed away and now leaves them in reality. Here they are again at Sky’s, watching the rain.

“It does have an ending. But it’s not a very good one.” She takes a sip of her drink, sets it aside. “Change is the one constant thing in this world. People change. People grow apart. People move away. People stop texting and video chatting as often. People find new lives, new loves.” Her gaze drifts to her folded hands. “At least you can know that somewhere, at sometime in the past… You were young and free. And those moments?” She sucks in a breath, unable to speak anymore. It almost seems as if the words physically hurt her.

He sets aside his cup and places a hand atop hers. “They’ll last forever,” he says softly.

She looks up at him, eyes glassy. “But you can never go back.”

He stands up, tugging her up with him. “You can’t go back, but you can always go forward.” She follows him as he leads her outside into the rain and the sputtering glow of the streetlamps.

“Where are we going?” she asks, laughing a little.

“To be young and free.” He’s soaked now. Water drips from his hair into his face and from the sky into his bones. He couldn’t care less.

She stops him, standing beneath a streetlamp. Even soaking wet, she’s beautiful. “And how are we going to be young and free if I don’t even know your name? I know that we go to school together, but I don’t know your name.”

“Jamie,” he says, a smile sneaking onto his face. “And what’s yours?”

Her face lights up, and now it’s her tugging him along behind her. “You’ll have to wait and see.”

All he can do, all he wants to do, is follow her to see what sort of memories they can create together.

Do you like writing flash fiction?

10 thoughts on “Penprints Flash Fiction Dash 2019

  1. Jamie??? DUDE DO I RECOGNIZE A CHARACTER or is your naming just a coincidence???? AHHHH. I LIVE FOR STORIES LIKE THESE I really do. this was so lovely!! I loved it!! and I listened to the song while I read it ^-^ good job! can’t wait to write mine XDD

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    1. That is a character you’re recognizing! I wanted to write something about him during his high school days, and this was a great opportunity. Awww thank you! ❤️ You’re the sweetest. I can’t wait to read yours!

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      1. Well, I had to pull out on the Dash cos I didn’t write it in time 😛 But I’ll send it to you when I do get around to it, which I will XD

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